I loved this! Decent Arthur/Morgana fic has been thin on the ground recently and this was so in-character and so sweet. I could completely see ALL of it happening on the show.
The only thing that mildly brought me out of it was when you kept talking about one or other of them getting 'mad' with the other - that's an Americanism so it kind of jars. since the narrative voice is Morgana's (even though it's not first person, it's her point of view) it would probably fit better to describe her as getting angry, not 'mad'.
Also, when Arthur calls his father 'Uther' near the beginning of the fic, which I don't think he'd do (I'm pretty sure he's never done it on the show, anyway).
But those are completely minor quibbles and the fic as a whole was REALLY good and I seriously enjoyed it. Thanks so much for writing it!
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The only thing that mildly brought me out of it was when you kept talking about one or other of them getting 'mad' with the other - that's an Americanism so it kind of jars. since the narrative voice is Morgana's (even though it's not first person, it's her point of view) it would probably fit better to describe her as getting angry, not 'mad'.
Also, when Arthur calls his father 'Uther' near the beginning of the fic, which I don't think he'd do (I'm pretty sure he's never done it on the show, anyway).
But those are completely minor quibbles and the fic as a whole was REALLY good and I seriously enjoyed it. Thanks so much for writing it!