"If he thought any of his lines actually worked, though, he isn't dumb enough to think they'd work on her, so he stays silent."
Your Lamb POV is terrific. You've really captured just how hot it is to be felt up by someone who's completely inappropriate for you and dangerous in more ways than one. (What fun! So many possible consequences for these two.) And yet, she's always in charge, even when he's throwing her against the wall or slamming home in the front seat of the cruiser.
And most of all I loved the thought of Veronica taking the wheel and going joyriding with Sacks in hot pursuit, lights blazing and siren blaring. So deliciously wrong it's right.
I know the fandom calls this pairing DoVe, but wouldn't LaVe really be more appropriate?? (Just thought I'd inspire you.)
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"If he thought any of his lines actually worked, though, he isn't dumb enough to think they'd work on her, so he stays silent."
Your Lamb POV is terrific. You've really captured just how hot it is to be felt up by someone who's completely inappropriate for you and dangerous in more ways than one. (What fun! So many possible consequences for these two.) And yet, she's always in charge, even when he's throwing her against the wall or slamming home in the front seat of the cruiser.
And most of all I loved the thought of Veronica taking the wheel and going joyriding with Sacks in hot pursuit, lights blazing and siren blaring. So deliciously wrong it's right.
I know the fandom calls this pairing DoVe, but wouldn't LaVe really be more appropriate?? (Just thought I'd inspire you.)